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1of-dem
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Age : 32
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PostSubject: Re: Personal poetry: Post and review   Thu Dec 30, 2010 3:49 am

here is another one, dedicated to a few childhood peers, aquaintances and friends. its a culmination of the feelings i felt from all of their deaths.

hope you enjoy.

All of what we did

We jumped, we ran
We sang , we planned
We hopped and skipped
We fell and tripped

My good friend,
Friend till the end
Dark are the days
Which highlight the night
Dark are my dreams
With you as the fading image
A fading moment
Left to be only a fragment of time
A forever blatant reminder
A reminder only in mind

We talked as we walked
And failed as we tried
We did everything friends should do
Then you died

by M.B
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PostSubject: Re: Personal poetry: Post and review   Thu Dec 30, 2010 3:58 am

ok guys here is the final one for now, i really hope people still read this section of the forum as i think it was doing fantastic and had many great poems from different members. still, with close to 1000 views at present i think it still has some interest..

this last poem for the day has lots of hidden meanings and the likes, see if you can see what they are and where im coming from..

also most of my poems to date are rather mundane to the poet lauerete amongst us as i write in a predictable A/B/a/b rhyming style, a style i am changing as time prgresses.;.

on a final note, i would love to see more poetry from you guys also, so please keep your ideas flowing and the poems coming..i prefer to read a good poem than write an over zealous one..

happy xmas and new year to you all..





The moving movement

On the road it seems
Is where we need to be
Away from the civilised housing estates
And protecting the impressionable from the likes of me

As we leave and trod along
From the lovely scenic town
Tinkers leave here right now
Helps to drown out the motors sound

Any farmers field
Or any inviting ditch
As long as we don’t park to close
To the lovely expensive soccer pitch

We rob and we steal
And we fight and we kill
We eat our babies, our children and our pets
We do all your imagine allows you to expect

Ireland as a nation
Was founded to obtain rights
Where along the distorted road
Did the people lose sight

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PostSubject: Re: Personal poetry: Post and review   Tue Nov 15, 2011 2:51 pm

Wow, this thread has recieved more than 1400 views..its great that their is intrest in such threads..

I have been away now for some time, busy busy etc lol..

Id love to see mroe of your stuff on here guys, something to read during the coming cold nights..

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